Magical Revolt: Mimiko's choice
Available in English and Spanish!
Synopsis
The company Magical Shield offers to the market bodyguards customized as magical girls.
Mimiko is one of these laboratory "products". She works as a bodyguard for an idol along with Puchin, her magical pet and only friend. Their work will be interrupted by an approaching revolt. Mimiko will have to choose between supporting the magical girls' rebel cause or staying loyal to the company.
Magical Revolt: Mimiko’s Choice is a visual novel of the magical girls genre in a cyberpunk setting. It presents a world plagued by mistreatment and abuse where, however, there is still a place for friendship, love, and True Magic.
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"The revolution is near. Which side are you going to stand for?"
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Main cast
- A damaged and broken magical girl, accompanied by a sickly but cute little kitten
- A rebel and badass magical girl
- Two capricious and quite unbearable idols
Features
- Available in English and Spanish
- 7000 words
- Decisions that matter (You have to choose a side, right?)
- 6 original tracks
⚠ Warnings
The text contains mentions of sexual harassment, violence, murder, and suicide
Credits
Writing, English translation: Mariel Paredes (Linkedin)
Programming: Dante Castelluccio (Linkedin)
Art, UI design: Dei Pronko (Linkedin) (Behance)
Music, sound: Smooth Satan (Soundcloud)
English proofreading: Lucía Lanzani (Linkedin)
Social media
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Next releases
We are working to finish the game.
What is this revolt? Have you ever thought about what True Magic is?
Stay tuned!
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Sinopsis
La compañía Magical Shield ofrece al mercado guardaespaldas customizadas como chicas mágicas.
Mimiko es uno de esos "productos" de laboratorio. Ella trabaja como guardaespaldas de una idol junto a Puchin, su mascota mágica y único amigo. Su día a día laboral se verá interrumpido por una rebelión que se acerca. Mimiko va a tener que elegir entre apoyar a la facción de las chicas mágicas rebeldes o mantenerse leal a la compañía.
Magical Revolt: Mimiko's choice es una novela visual del género chicas mágicas situada en un setting cyberpunk. Se presenta un mundo plagado de maltratos y abusos donde, sin embargo, todavía hay lugar para la amistad, el amor y la Magia Verdadera.
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"La revolución está cerca ¿De qué lado vas a estar?"
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Personajes principales
- Una chica mágica rota y dañada, acompañada por un gatito enfermizo pero adorable
- Una chica mágica rebelde y ruda
- Dos idols caprichosos y bastante insoportables
Features
- Disponible en inglés y en español
- 7000 palabras
- Decisiones que importan (tenés que elegir de qué lado estás, ¿verdad?)
- 6 canciones originales
⚠ Advertencias
El texto del videojuego contiene menciones de abuso sexual, violencia, asesinato y suicidio.
Créditos
Guion, traducción al inglés: Mariel Paredes (Linkedin)
Programación: Dante Castelluccio (Linkedin)
Arte, diseño de interfaz: Dei Pronko (Linkedin) (Behance)
Música, sonido: Smooth Satan (Soundcloud)
Corrección de versión en inglés: Lucía Lanzani (Linkedin)
Redes sociales
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Próximos lanzamientos
Estamos trabajando para terminar el juego.
¿Qué es esta revuelta? ¿Alguna vez pensaste en cuál es el significado de la Magia Verdadera?
¡Estate atento a las novedades!
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Download
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Development log
- New assets, animations and UIApr 25, 2024
- Many updates! Web version, new assets, text correction, animations and moreJul 16, 2023
- Now we have social media!Jun 19, 2023
Comments
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Interesting story and visualy good, the only ''problem'' i saw where some small typo. Awaiting the next part with anticipation.
Hello! Thanks for your comment.
We’re currently working on the next chapter ♥
I can't judge before finishing it completely, but I am amazed by the UI design already. The text boxes are giving me vibes I can't find words for yet, but it's reaaaally well done!!
Doesn't happen too often that a screenshot makes me think: "hell, this looks expensive". Even tho the screen is very busy, it's not distracting from the story itself.
So much to that!
I will either update or re-comment once I am done, but not today :)
From my very first glance at the game a very well-done job!!
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We're glad you liked the UI and text boxes !
We're looking forward to your next feedback :)
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I don't need to tell you that I really enjoy the game, else I would probably not play it twice, so let's hop to the 'bugs'.
(1) A thing I notice often, but sadly I can't tell you what is causing it: New passages start at the bottom and the player needs to scroll up to continue reading
[2] Quite irritating, not a bug though: It took me a bit to get used to selecting an option twice. (1 click causes option 2 to disappear and another click will reveal the new text]
I am getting the point of it, but still, I keep eye-rolling about it because I expect the flow to keep... flowin' ~.~
I don't even have anything else to be picky about. Maybe if I really wanted to: I wouldn’t need to use the scrollbar at all. Whenever I click, it pulls my attention away from the text with its animation. I’m not quite sure if the scrollbar is necessary if you can scroll with the mouse wheel intuitively. Another tiny visual thing: The 'real-time' text messages, which are also triggered by clicking, could, in my opinion, use a tiny bit of polishing, a slide-up animation, idk. It doesn't feel as text-chatty as it looks.
Probably sounds like a terrible review, but it's sure not meant as such! Considering the time you had given: great! ♥
The audio work is stunning! From the small beeps to the 'cutscenes', enjoyed it very much.
Thanks for finishing the game and completing the detailed review 💖
Love the music, especially the cute menu one!
I didn't manage to finish it yet. The art is nice, I like the pet ideas. Actually I think it might have been better if the pets were animals and not cyborgs. It would have made for an interesting contrast owner-pet and how the pet would show the magical girl's human nature.
Not a big fan of the story though but that's just me, I'm very picky with this aspect in many games. I found at some point a story part that ended with 1 choice, I didn't quite understand what was the point of that, it's not like I could have picked anything else.
Also writing related, there were some sentences that didn't make much sense, and sometimes the flow of the paragraph was pretty bad (starting with long sentences, etc).
I liked the UI, it was great to get to read so much at once, rather than pressing a button to read line-by-line. I hate that design, glad to see this was different.
Also the scrollbar is cool too because the line-by-line design usually doesn't give you the option to go back.
I appreciate the small download size.
Thanks for the game :)
We appreciate your honest, polite and detailed review ♥
We are going to take it into account to improve the game and our performance.
Thanks for playing our game! ♥