Available in English and Spanish!

Synopsis

The company Magical Shield offers to the market bodyguards customized as magical girls. 

Mimiko is one of these laboratory "products". She works as a bodyguard for an idol along with Puchin, her magical pet and only friend. Their work will be interrupted by an approaching revolt. Mimiko will have to choose between supporting the magical girls' rebel cause or staying loyal to the company.


Magical Revolt: Mimiko’s Choice is a visual novel of the magical girls genre in a cyberpunk setting. It presents a world plagued by mistreatment and abuse where, however, there is still a place for friendship, love, and True Magic.

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"The revolution is near. Which side are you going to stand for?"

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Main cast

  • A damaged and broken magical girl, accompanied by a sickly but cute little kitten 
  • A rebel and badass magical girl
  • Two capricious and quite unbearable idols 


Features

  • Available in English and Spanish
  • 7000 words
  • Decisions that matter (You have to choose a side, right?)
  • 6 original tracks


 ⚠ Warnings

The text contains mentions of sexual harassment, violence, murder, and suicide


Credits

Writing, English translation: Mariel Paredes (Linkedin)

Programming: Dante Castelluccio (Linkedin)

Art, UI design: Dei Pronko (Linkedin) (Behance)

Music, sound: Smooth Satan (Soundcloud)

English proofreading: Lucía Lanzani (Linkedin)


Social media

Tiktok

Instagram


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Next releases

The current version of the game is 1/3 of the total scheduled. We are working on releasing the next chapters.

What is this revolt? Have you ever thought about what True Magic is? 

Stay tuned!

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Sinopsis

La compañía Magical Shield ofrece al mercado guardaespaldas customizadas como chicas mágicas.

Mimiko es uno de esos "productos" de laboratorio. Ella trabaja como guardaespaldas de una idol junto a Puchin, su mascota mágica y único amigo. Su día a día laboral se verá interrumpido por una rebelión que se acerca. Mimiko va a tener que elegir entre apoyar a la facción de las chicas mágicas rebeldes o mantenerse leal a la compañía.

Magical Revolt: Mimiko's choice es una novela visual del género chicas mágicas situada en un setting cyberpunk. Se presenta un mundo plagado de maltratos y abusos donde, sin embargo, todavía hay lugar para la amistad, el amor y la Magia Verdadera.


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"La revolución está cerca ¿De qué lado vas a estar?"

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Personajes principales

  • Una chica mágica rota y dañada, acompañada por un gatito enfermizo pero adorable
  • Una chica mágica rebelde y ruda
  • Dos idols caprichosos y bastante insoportables


Features

  • Disponible en inglés y en español 
  • 7000 palabras
  • Decisiones que importan (tenés que elegir de qué lado estás, ¿verdad?)
  • 6 canciones originales


 ⚠ Advertencias

El texto contiene menciones de abuso sexual, violencia, asesinato y suicidio.


Créditos

Guion, traducción al inglés: Mariel Paredes (Linkedin)

Programación: Dante Castelluccio (Linkedin)

Arte, diseño de interfaz: Dei Pronko (Linkedin) (Behance)

Música, sonido: Smooth Satan (Soundcloud)

Corrección de versión en inglés: Lucía Lanzani (Linkedin)


Redes sociales

Tiktok

Instagram


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Próximos lanzamientos

La versión actual del juego es 1/3 del total programado. Estamos trabajando para sacar los próximos capítulos. 

¿Qué es esta revuelta? ¿Alguna vez pensaste en cuál es el significado de la Magia Verdadera?

¡Estate atento a las novedades!

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Download

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MagicalRevolt-1.3.1-win.zip 118 MB
MagicalRevolt-1.3.1-linux.tar.bz2 112 MB
MagicalRevolt-1.3.1-mac.zip 124 MB
Magical Revolt - Soundtrack.zip 27 MB

Development log

Comments

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Interesting story and visualy good, the only ''problem'' i saw where some small typo. Awaiting the next part with anticipation. 

Hello! Thanks for your comment.

We’re currently working on the next chapter ♥

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I can't judge before finishing it completely, but I am amazed by the UI design already. The text boxes are giving me vibes I can't find words for yet, but it's reaaaally well done!! 
Doesn't happen too often that a screenshot makes me think: "hell, this looks expensive". Even tho the screen is very busy, it's not distracting from the story itself.
So much to that!
I will either update or re-comment once I am done, but not today :)
From my very first glance at the game a very well-done job!!



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We're glad you liked the UI and text boxes !
We're looking forward to your next feedback :)
Thank you so much ♥

I am back ♥
I don't need to tell you that I really enjoy the game, else I would probably not play it twice, so let's hop to the 'bugs'.
(1) A thing I notice often, but sadly I can't tell you what is causing it: New passages start at the bottom and the player needs to scroll up to continue reading
[2] Quite irritating, not a bug though: It took me a bit to get used to selecting an option twice. (1 click causes option 2 to disappear and another click will reveal the new text]
I am getting the point of it, but still, I keep eye-rolling about it because I expect the flow to keep... flowin' ~.~
I don't even have anything else to be picky about. Maybe if I really wanted to: I wouldn’t need to use the scrollbar at all. Whenever I click, it pulls my attention away from the text with its animation. I’m not quite sure if the scrollbar is necessary if you can scroll with the mouse wheel intuitively. Another tiny visual thing: The  'real-time' text messages, which are also triggered by clicking, could, in my opinion, use a tiny bit of polishing, a slide-up animation, idk. It doesn't feel as text-chatty as it looks. 
Probably sounds like a terrible review, but it's sure not meant as such! Considering the time you had given: great! ♥

The audio work is stunning! From the small beeps to the 'cutscenes', enjoyed it very much. 


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Thanks for finishing the game and completing the detailed review 💖

Love the music, especially the cute menu one!


I didn't manage to finish it yet. The art is nice, I like the pet ideas. Actually I think it might have been better if the pets were animals and not cyborgs. It would have made for an interesting contrast owner-pet and how the pet would show the magical girl's human nature.

Not a big fan of the story though but that's just me, I'm very picky with this aspect in many games. I found at some point a story part that ended with 1 choice, I didn't quite understand what was the point of that, it's not like I could have picked anything else.
Also writing related, there were some sentences that didn't make much sense, and sometimes the flow of the paragraph was pretty bad (starting with long sentences, etc).


I liked the UI, it was great to get to read so much at once, rather than pressing a button to read line-by-line. I hate that design, glad to see this was different.


Also the scrollbar is cool too because the line-by-line design usually doesn't give you the option to go back.


I appreciate the small download size.


Thanks for the game :)

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We appreciate your honest, polite and detailed review ♥

We are going to take it into account to improve the game and our performance.

Thanks for playing our game! ♥